Thursday, March 19, 2009

# If I Were An Object Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were an object
I would be a guitar
So that my man would hold me
Close to his heart
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COMMENTS
Patti Masterman 28 November 2009

Wow, this did remind me of a song; one with most stirring sounds.

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Duh Huh 13 April 2009

I love how you made yourself an object on this one. Very imaginatively creative and a definite talented poem. Thank you for sharing ;)

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Laurie Hill 01 April 2009

A lovely soft, sensual, tasteful write, love the guitar analogy 10

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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