If I were a rabbit
I would hop all around
I would nibble carrots
Without making a sound
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very nice It was very interesting and contained a lot of informations.
well it is a different type of poem. what type do you call it?
Nice poem Risha, you can happily continue.... We will never tell you to stop.
Risha is princess of imagination, So nicely she has written this poem I have no alternate but to comment it's simply wonderful.........10
I am going to post a wish list and please go on writing this one continually.
I like it a lot... I wish I was free....keep writing......to me yr a genius...just like me.....forming poem versus within seconds...try reading my poems...if u have the time........
this poem is as cute n sweet as you are. great job, keep on writing! maryam
you've got quite an imagination going there ^_^...keep up the good work... yours, lc
Wow! ! ! Risha I was all wound up and just running along with this marvelous poem, I love it. I enjoyed all the animals you spoke of, you took me into the poem Risha and I could see each animal. You have a fabulous imagination and a lot of knowledge, Excellent poem as usual Risha.--Melvina--
Risha, Such an lovely poem, so clever and sooooo imaginative! Keep up the good writing. Have you tried writing Cinquain Poetry? If so, great! If not, if you would like the rules let me know. Most sincerely, D. A. Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I really love your poem Risha! You used a lot of great expressions in this 'very long' poem of yours. In this poem, did u imagine what some of the animals do or did u know it from the top of your head? (write your answer back) I also enjoyed the ending because it was very funny and entertaining. Anyway, I better stop typing before you read 2 pages of a comment and you fall asleep while reading it :) LOL Ta Ta! P. L..
Wow, what an imaginative, impressive poem that made me laugh! ((Smile)) You Risha have so much talent for writing poetry...and I look forward to reading more of your work soon. I am a friend of Melvina Germains and she told me about how wonderful your poetry is...she sure did not lie to me! If you continue to write U will be famous! Great imagery and you 4 sure know how to hold a readers interest no matter the length of the poem...Great JOB! ! (10stars) Keep writing from your heart, Shelley
Hi Risha This is definitely a clear and vivid portrayal of brilliant imagination. You are a ' tender' poet and a master of your 'piece'. The present is already bright, hope to see the splendor, yonder. Good luck.
This is marvelous. You have a gigantic vocabulary Risha! Very charming poem.
Risha, I love your imagination and reading your poems...keep up the great work young lady! ! Love and Hugs, Diane
Thank you so much it is useful to me