Sunday, February 19, 2012

If I Were A Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were a moon, I'd chase your sun,
Or if a butterfly, you'd be the one
Flower, that I could not resist;
Or if a valley, your green I would kiss,
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Patti Masterman
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Hans Vr 24 February 2012

Wonderful poem Really one of your masterpieces, Patti. Very nice expression of love. Excellent

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Stevens Cadet 22 February 2012

Really like this one. Love the transition of words

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Valerie Dohren 22 February 2012

A lovely write Patti.

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Eric Cockrell 21 February 2012

love this one... the very rhythm of love!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 20 February 2012

This is really beautiful and excellent. I love the word choice and the style.

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