Monday, January 25, 2010

If I Were A Leaf Comments

Rating: 4.4

If I were a leaf,
I'd like to be blown away into the sky,
Breathe the air that comes from my home.
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Wang Qian
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Arun Tp 27 October 2014

nice poem. excellent imagination.

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Bernard Snyder 27 October 2014

Great poem Wang! Nice imagery. Well-deserved 'poem of the day' selection. Congrats! ! ! I gave it a 10! ! !

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Ramesh Rai 27 October 2014

beautiful write. loved reading it. invite you to read mine one

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Babatunde Aremu 27 October 2014

If wishes are horses.......talking about our desires and dreams. Nice write. Thanks for sharing

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Brian Jani 29 April 2014

I like this poem, please check mine out

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Lenny Camacho 27 October 2013

pretty cool piece here

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Jayne Davies 27 October 2013

Lovely poem! Well done!

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Bri Edwards 08 July 2013

someone put a second A in Beacause. i'm pretty sure it is a typo. i like the poem. if i were a twig, i might want you on me. this is a nice poem of memories. i especially enjoyed: If I were a leaf, I want to grow up, Beacause nature takes its course. So do I. but what does a leaf grow up to be but a larger leaf, .....or compost? i'll add this to my poemlist. thanks for sharing.

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Babatunde Aremu 27 October 2012

If I were a leaf, I want to be blown around the world Great poem. I felt like continuing the poem. Very sonorous

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Anita Sehgal 27 October 2012

light as a leaf... lovely read!

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Gordon Tseng 08 December 2011

If I were a leaf, I want the worm on me soon leave! If I were a leaf, I want your poem printed on me as an eternal piece. Smile!

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 August 2011

very nice.an emotional ink.liked it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2010

f I were a leaf, I want to grow up, Beacause nature takes its course. So do I....... lovely imagination for to be an part of nature...10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 25 January 2010

If you were a leaf, i wud hav like to be the tree from which you'll fall and be proud for being the best tree in the world.. Really, a lovely poem.

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Iron Panda 23™ 25 January 2010

this is sooo beautiful! ! ! :)

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