Saturday, December 30, 2017

If I Were A Bumble Bee Comments

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If I were a bumble bee
I would fly among the flowers
And  get stuck inside a bud
Tightly closed with its sepals
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Rini Shibu
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Billie Eilish 23 October 2020

Beautiful, i should use this for a song!

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Kostas Lagos 03 January 2018

This is a magnificent poem! A great painting made of words

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Rini Shibu 03 January 2018

Thanks Kostas for reading and commenting on this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2017

A great piece of poetry! Fascinating poetic imagination Rini, enjoyed a lot...! ..Happy New Year 2018........!

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Dillip for your comment and glad that you enjoyed it

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Lamar Cole 31 December 2017

This is a very creative poem about if I were a bumblebee.

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Lam for your encouraging words

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The Crow 30 December 2017

If we could all just die in a place we love. Good one Rini

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

It was good if happens so.. Thanks John

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2017

A very lovely poignant write. Well executed.

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Rini Shibu 31 December 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your lovely comment

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