If I Were! Comments

beautiful cinclusion of the poem. a beautiful write

Thanks for the valuable comments.Actually, when I started writing this poem, I was in light mood.Rupert Brooke is said to be the most handsome poet.In a jolly mood I wrote the first portion.Ultimately, I changed the course and ended it with reference of war.That's it.

If i were...someone else i rather to try their own abilities that i never ever get the chance to use it as myself. but back to my nature, i would try to find something in me that other dont have it, just want to make different as who i am when i am living still even in dreaming who i am, if i were...._Soul