If I Were....... Comments

very nice and lovely poem. thanks alot for sharing. i relly enjoyed this poem full of wishes and meanings.

wow awesome poem of wishes to someone who is very much special....10+++++++++++ i hope i would be able to make a sequel of this piece....Thanks! ! !

A poetic love letter beautifully expressed. You are a romantic to the depths of your soul. Very touching. As always, Sandra

Very very nicely written and for sure most of us feel the same very well expressed

lovely tercets with different metaphors! you represented your self in different shapes and that gave you the space to invent metaphors widely and to express your love better.it's wonderful...great work!

What a stunning metaphors! ! Great Job...++10++

a metaphorical write...expressing love and care through the healing powers of mother nature!

Beautiful love poem....... expressing your love in such a poetic way; with similes, lovely three lines stanzas, simple and well connected........

nicely done....expressive... if i were you i would rather say ''i love you'' directly..

its like a little song, nice poem

Well written poem Well express....

wow...what a nice poem here my friend...i love the simplicity yet sweet and meaningful verses entwined here.............10+++++++

If I were the cold, I would touch you gently Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely and you will see my love for you is greatly .................................. woww, you did a good job here, Ravi..great write