Sunday, March 6, 2011

If I Was A Girl Comments

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If I was a girl I'd be more understanding knowing that my man was my better half who makes me whole.
I would love him whole heartedly and stand by his side during good times and bad not naggin him about everything because I know he has the weight of the world on his shoulders.
I'd listen to him and care about what he thinks knowing how it feels to be ignored and neglected.
If I was a girl
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Robin Bennett 22 July 2012

I honestly get the emotions of what you are saying, because I believe you have been treated this way and that is horrible. But if you flip this around, it sounds just like my marriage. If he treated me the way any human being deserved to be treated, I would be a so much happier person therefore he'd be happier. He's too angry and self centered to see that. I wish he could read this, but he thinks poetry, inculding mine is useless. alas, he would never even see himself in this piece. I thank you for writing this. It has been like a sucker punch of reality and I hate you are not cherished either. A very emotional and truthful piece of art! -Robin xoxo

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