Friday, April 10, 2009
If I Told You Comments
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If i told you that I'd listen,
If i told you that I'd care,
Would you open up your heart to me?
and show me all that's there?
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Holly Smith
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Roshni D'Souza
25 April 2009
Really great flow of thoughts...simple, but so poignant! You certainly have a way with words, my dear! Don't stop writing!
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Reece Lyle
10 April 2009
love this one as well holly you really do have a talent for this: -)
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7/21/2025 11:13:07 AM # 1.0.0
Holly, that's an amazing poem! It's really simple yet effective. Go for it; -) xx