Sunday, August 10, 2008

If I Thought... Comments

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If I thought today would be the last time that I would see you I would hold on to you for a little longer.

If I thought that this would be the last time that I would ever talk to you I would make sure to hear everything that you wanted to say.
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Olivia Braun
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Marshall Cline 15 January 2009

I very much enjoyed how you made the emotions in the poem spew out my computer screen. ~Marshall Peter Cline II

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 August 2008

the thought of you would always be in the thought of me. spiritual magnetism.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 August 2008

Beautiful, so heartfelt.....thanks for sharing 10

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Olivia Braun

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