Monday, October 15, 2007

If I Thought One More Time Comments

Rating: 4.8

If I thought about time
I would lose my clock
If I thought about heartbreak
I would lose my love
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Kelly Lynn
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Brian Mills 15 October 2007

Njoy'd.....nicely writen, different but very nice.....loved the questions in it! ! ! thnx for sharing (10) ! ! ! Brian~

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Chris Mendros 15 October 2007

Once again, the best poetry deals more in questions than answers. Oh, that perplexing 'if'-word!

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Marc Mannheimer 15 October 2007

Really cool poem - it reminds me of lyrics

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