Friday, November 7, 2008

If I Sit Alone (11/7/08) Comments

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If I sit alone crying will anyone bother to find me
Will anyone care enough to look
Does anyone even know I'm gone
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Kayleigh ....
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Wow, I feel the same way. I guess all you can do is tell yourself that there are people who care. If not, it gets hard to live.

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Lee Crowell 10 November 2008

at my age it's easy to forget that 13 year olds have romantic relationships this good poem reminds me that my first girlfriend was 11 and I was 12 two suggestions: 1 keep questions to a minimum I have a self imposed rule that never allows questions in my poems when the questions come I write them down and eventually I end up using the answer, sometimes I can't find it and then I go on to something else 2 be careful with poems about love relationships because when your feelings are so close to the writing, it's difficult for us to catch the same emotion

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Kevin Eaglesfield 09 November 2008

Well written and touching.Kev

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