Wednesday, October 18, 2006

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if i should die now without apologizing to the people i love
that i have hurt in my life
would my soul be free
if i should vanish into the face of the earth
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Hamid Kareem 12 March 2008

i ask myself most of this same questions...... if i should die without fully completing my obligations........if i should die what will be their memories of me. wil i in death smile at a life well lived.nice poem showing things that most humans ask about their life.. BUT much as i like the poem..... i couldnt help thinking it could be writting in a much better form by you. great piece of work

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Kennedy Phadima 19 October 2006

that is such a heartfelt poem and its amazing that sometimes i ask myself some of those questions, i just hope we find answers some time soon.good luck!

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