If I Should Depart Comments

a strong attraction.............for the beautiful nature....................10/10.................greatly pleased...........thanks

The ethos of life orbit round the tracks of love and care and a true poet ever and ever tells the callous world about it Pattanayakji... You too have done the same noble job here. A fine poem and I AWARD 10 MARKS for this crafted piece.

a voyage accompanied by nature objects....nice.......

All objects in Nature, both living and non livning will definitely grieve over the departure of a man who loved them! It is said that even plants can identify love! Interesting write!