Friday, April 10, 2009

' If I'M Your Next Victim' Comments

Rating: 2.8

'You' and those like you, who makes such a beautiful place
'God created called Earth' so unsafe, here's some food for thought
for you today, you hide in unseen places waiting for unsuspecting
faces, who are unaware of your deadly stare, how did your life get
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Tina Marie Clark
COMMENTS
Barry A. Lanier 13 April 2009

a poetic narrative filled with passion and a message for the offenders...I felt some of this discontent and rage when I penned my poem of advocacy called 'Rape and Revenge'

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Jack Price 11 April 2009

This is more than a tribute, this is a statement! I thank the author for having the incite to write so a heartfelt poem. Inside the lines, I feel the strength of the author. God bless you!

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If I'm Your Next Friend, I get my words heard with affection.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 April 2009

So ' If I'm Your Next Victim' and I pray to 'God' I'm not I pray that it means either voluntarily or forced ' Your Crime Spree Has Stopped! '.........................Good Write.................wonderful lines......

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