Friday, May 13, 2011

If I'M Still Here In August Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I'm still here in August,
Then it will be too late.
I'll never walk in the arid lands,
That someone else, controls my fate.
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Juan Olivarez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Juan this is really awesome. A great piece of art bringing forward the apprehension the poet's being. Great work indeed. A fine 10 Thanks for sharing. Please read and rate my poem ' A deal in helplessness' on page 1

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