If I Lived One More Life... I Would Comments

nice heart touching poem...i like the way you end it :)

oh, what a poem so very nice one, great poem, ever best appologies Luwi

Bridging the gap....a way of reconciling....simply simple and superb

so full of sentiments..touching lines indeed.................10

nice one filled with emotions

An emotional piece to read, Niken. Passionately penned.

You're doing fine with the expressions.May your loved ones be delighted all through Niken.

a wonderful insightful wish...great poem to muse....10

a very nice poem. i wish i were a friend of you.so alluring voted10 surya

nice! ! ! if i live for one life.. i would happy, if i can make all people around me smile..10+