Monday, January 30, 2006

If I Leave Here Tomorrow Comments

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If I leave here tomorrow
Would you still remember me?
Would you realize I was gone
Or would you forget what you can't see?
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Denise Clark
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Loretta Rowley 28 February 2008

In most cases I feel there is a part of everyone that feels this way even if for a brief moment in their existance here. I for one can tell you that those lives you have entered, those people could not forget you, you are thought of by many and cared about. wiether or not you realize you have touched me by just being there and loving me and I know a lot of people who would agree. I love you XOXOs ~Loretta

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denise, that poem was heart touching! for some reason it made me think of my aunt carmen (you can check it out under my profile with the title 'carmen') who died. she was like my best friend but now she is gone. it makes me think about her because sometimes i forget what it was like to be around her. i still remember how she used to get drunk. but n-e-ways i loved this poem! love, pete wentz' babe

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Frank Bana 31 January 2006

Thank you Denise. You are thought of and would not be forgotten. More immediately, the poem speaks for you.. and for itself. Thank you for sharing those fears that many of us in comparable positions also have to feel...

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Shannon Chapel 30 January 2006

Denise, I'll remember you! This is a terrific poem, Denise. Beautiful and poignant. Well done, and a 10 from me. Shannon

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Jack Bell 30 January 2006

Wow. What an amazing poem and it flows so well. Well written, keep it up!

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Denise Clark

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