Friday, April 22, 2016

If I Knew New Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I knew new
To be the best foot forward
Then I to step outside
All reservation
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Susan Lacovara
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

Loved this stanza... That precise moment of my eyes Meeting yours hearing stories that have no words Welled up wishes Of finding answers to questions the heart Nice poem. A sweet 10 for it. With an invitation for your valuable remarks on my poems and thanking you for this sharing.. Subhas

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 April 2016

wonderful poem seeking answers questions of heart which loves peace

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2016

Fear and fault would fall aside To bramble blown by the wind And hat, left, to build upon If I knew new... And You....... i have parked too long. on a no standing zone...... fine expressions of the past and now the present meeting and the desire to go on.... in life. thank you. dear poetess. tony

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Kelly Kurt 22 April 2016

A wonderfully written piece, Susan

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