Thursday, February 2, 2023

If I Knew How To Spul! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sincerly, it is the hearts of humankind
I want to reach; to fulfill my desire to find
A way to inflame the passions I avow
And write all the poems I want to tell
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Jim McGill
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Bri Edwards 16 September 2023

oK, I reread the poem and NOW I kind of LIKE IT. : ) BRI ...........AND, yes, YOU did LEAVE OUT the 'e'. I can not upgrade my rating by stars. : (

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2023

(cont.) but this spulling poem (not so much a spelling poem, actually) was/is disappointing. I'll look for another from you, not read by me, which will restore my 'faith in you'. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2023

(cont.) Really, Jim, I 'loved' your bible-based (influenced by a bible story of the Garden Of Eden) poems, two so far, titled, in part, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2. They were GREAT. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2023

I don't remember being here before today, but I left comments [ one month ago! ! ! I really am sort of shocked at what I today judge to be very inferior poetry. (contl)

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

3 stars AND I SUGGEST (that) you check your spulling! ! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

It's not 'sincerly' [sic] which you are 'looking for'. OK, I think I just saw 'e' (#2) run out the door. This reminds me of 2 of my poems, but it's much shorter. Running out of 'ink' or time?

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Pallavi Tripathi 11 April 2023

Nice limerick I really enjoyed!

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2023

It AIN'T a limerick! ! ! limerick: 'A light humorous, nonsensical, or bawdy verse of five usually anapestic lines with the rhyme scheme aabba, in which the first, second, and fifth lines are in trimeter, and the third and fourth lines are in dimeter.'

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Bharati Nayak 11 April 2023

Read Bri Edward's poem 'My English sucks' and you will easily learn how to spul. By the way I new how to rite poetri from ur poam.

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Rob Lamberton 13 February 2023

I dont no how too spill either!

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Jim McGill 02 April 2023

If you look closely, I left out the ‘e' in surely! ! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 February 2023

lol Jim Good one! ! ! !

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Jim McGill 12 February 2023

Thank you LeeAnn. I'm not going to change it. Some of the funniest things are ‘accidentall'! ! !

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Kim Barney 11 February 2023

Dunt wurry, Jim. You spel just as wul as sum peepel.

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Jim McGill 12 February 2023

Great!

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Jim McGill 11 February 2023

The joke is on me! I just noticed. The word ‘Sincerely' is ‘spuld' wrong. So I guess I really can't ‘spul'.

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