Monday, January 12, 2009

If I Knew Comments

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If I knew that you were drawing your last breath
I would be at your bedside.
Holding your hand in my hands,
Letting you know everything is all right.
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Cory Jensen
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Artem Urlapov 03 March 2011

Absolutely breath-taking. Thanks so much for sharing this wonderful piece!

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Jacob Courtney 15 January 2009

Indeed if we only knew. We all would love that. To have someone there for you no matter what would be amazing. For you to love someone that much you would do all that for them is truly what love is about. a neverending emotion that spreads its wings everywhere.

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Rachel The Hair Guru 12 January 2009

Oh my...this one really touched my heart. For I know, we are all born to die. That life is a precious gift that does not last forever. That tomorrow is never promised. So I have learned...that we must live each moment in the moment, never let a chance go by to tell the ones we love how much they mean to us. Thank you for this heartfelt poem Cory.

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