Sunday, August 2, 2015

If I Knew Comments

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If I knew then
that you'd change me forever
that you'd redefine my definition of lover
and affect my ability to love
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Leslie Alexis
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 March 2019

Write comment. Very impressive write, Leslie. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2016

Woah a great poetic sarcastic poem on bitter love it must be. Strong words emotive n lamenting regret tone n words. Kudos for the fine freeverse style. Pls do review my latest poem too called poetry commentary.....

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2016

When i reached this part..i was like dang! ! ! that line just a good punch line about time..and whole poem just amazing! and can be such a romantic letter too

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Kelly Kurt 22 August 2015

A great poem, Leslie. If only we knew everything beforehand.

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