Saturday, September 15, 2018

If I Have Comments

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Awareness if I have of an artist's
Backed by perceptive heart of a poet,
A mind loving harmony that insists
On freshness of dew-drops, wings of a jet
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2018

If so, let me post life's first private page Whilst I'm well into my second childhood, That I can turn to at mellow old age, And hope it helps soften my solitude. ‘If I', ah what a splendid little bird! What if there was no ‘what if' in this world? ......so impressive with lofty theme. Lovely poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 September 2018

Anirudhha, such a sublime sonnet...10++++

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