Tuesday, April 16, 2013

If I Had Ten More Minutes Comments

Rating: 4.3

If I had ten more minutes
and my voice was not faint
nor my face so devoid
or my mind so blank,
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Savannah Oakes
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Andrew Daglish 13 September 2013

a great poem. really well writen

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Kira Parson 24 April 2013

amazing. I aspire to write like you someday. The words flow on the page(or screen) . Loved it.

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Paul Brookes 17 April 2013

Something of a Shakespere sonnet here. I know it's not in sonnet form but it feels so lyrical and smooth. It has a beautiful flowing line. Thanks for sharing

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