Monday, June 25, 2012

If I Had Ever Lived Before Comments

Rating: 4.9

If I had ever lived before
What would I then have been
As a pauper low and poor
Or as a noble Queen
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Valerie Dohren
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Lyn Paul 11 January 2014

A lovely write Valerie. Made me think of Rememberance Day 11/11/11 that we celebrate each year all the lives lost to keep us all alive. I always seem to look at the clock at 11: 11 am and that always gets me wondering. Keep smiling x

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Heather Wilkins 29 May 2013

and perhaps some of us have lived before. and maybe will live again. I do believe it could be possible. nice write

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John Brown 20 August 2012

Another great piece of work Valerie.

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Marvelous and brilliant piece of writing. I love your writings

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Smoky Hoss 08 July 2012

Wise and wonderful words; I agree with Juan, you are indeed a world-class poet! Peace.

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Karen Sinclair 08 July 2012

Gorgeous write of reincarnation speculation and fabulous ending...tyvm karen

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Joseph Anderson 07 July 2012

Would you have been as great at poetry, as now. I am doubtful, because with you true poetry has been reborn. Melodious, thoughtful and just plain beautiful

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Valsa George 07 July 2012

A beautiful poem with a more beautiful conclusion! ! .....as always, your versification is great! !

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Smoooooooooooooooth as silk on satin, Valerie...Virtually flawless metre and a rhyme sceme to match, this pen-gem breathes deep on the crisp, tightly cropt structure you have adritly employed, here...Solid craftsWO manship, young lady, indeed! ~FjR~

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Elena Sandu 05 July 2012

Exceptional poem! And very true! Kindness associated with empty pockets. I love it, love your inspiration (heart) for writing it, thank you! !

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Anie Vans 05 July 2012

The last verse beams, and sums up this beautiful poem. Were nice if every heart felt that way. But, hopefully, many do.

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Meena Mustafa 03 July 2012

A fantastic poem... straight from the heart :)

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Marilyn Lott 03 July 2012

This is wonderful! I often feel so blessed to live where I do and have a safe and comfortable world.

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Juan Olivarez 03 July 2012

Lol that Captain Cur is something else. I agree with the second part of his comment. Beautiful poem, Val you are a world class talent. Thank you for your lovely poetry. God bless.

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Captain Cur 02 July 2012

Very bad poem, Val! As a pirate I pick option one. I always fail these tests. Honestly, great poem. Insightful and so, so true.

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Kasia Fedyk 30 June 2012

I love this poem Valerie, it is beautiful with so much depth and meaning.

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Kevin Halls 29 June 2012

Smashing poem Val. i've never had a lot of money so don't know what it feels like. But we've all at times thought what if? But you've been blessed with the gift of writing great poetry, so your rich in other ways.

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Dave Walker 28 June 2012

Money can make you forget what you really have in life, when you don't have much money you never lose sight of whats important in life. A fantastic poem.

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Godfrey Morris 27 June 2012

Lovely thoughts of poetry.....Great Poem Val

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Neela Nath Das 27 June 2012

It is better to be poor than to be rich and mean.Very true words.As you write always.Simply superb!

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