If I had ever lived before
What would I then have been
As a pauper low and poor
Or as a noble Queen
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and perhaps some of us have lived before. and maybe will live again. I do believe it could be possible. nice write
Marvelous and brilliant piece of writing. I love your writings
Wise and wonderful words; I agree with Juan, you are indeed a world-class poet! Peace.
Gorgeous write of reincarnation speculation and fabulous ending...tyvm karen
Would you have been as great at poetry, as now. I am doubtful, because with you true poetry has been reborn. Melodious, thoughtful and just plain beautiful
A beautiful poem with a more beautiful conclusion! ! .....as always, your versification is great! !
Smoooooooooooooooth as silk on satin, Valerie...Virtually flawless metre and a rhyme sceme to match, this pen-gem breathes deep on the crisp, tightly cropt structure you have adritly employed, here...Solid craftsWO manship, young lady, indeed! ~FjR~
Exceptional poem! And very true! Kindness associated with empty pockets. I love it, love your inspiration (heart) for writing it, thank you! !
The last verse beams, and sums up this beautiful poem. Were nice if every heart felt that way. But, hopefully, many do.
This is wonderful! I often feel so blessed to live where I do and have a safe and comfortable world.
Lol that Captain Cur is something else. I agree with the second part of his comment. Beautiful poem, Val you are a world class talent. Thank you for your lovely poetry. God bless.
Very bad poem, Val! As a pirate I pick option one. I always fail these tests. Honestly, great poem. Insightful and so, so true.
I love this poem Valerie, it is beautiful with so much depth and meaning.
Smashing poem Val. i've never had a lot of money so don't know what it feels like. But we've all at times thought what if? But you've been blessed with the gift of writing great poetry, so your rich in other ways.
Money can make you forget what you really have in life, when you don't have much money you never lose sight of whats important in life. A fantastic poem.
It is better to be poor than to be rich and mean.Very true words.As you write always.Simply superb!
A lovely write Valerie. Made me think of Rememberance Day 11/11/11 that we celebrate each year all the lives lost to keep us all alive. I always seem to look at the clock at 11: 11 am and that always gets me wondering. Keep smiling x