Friday, May 6, 2011

If I Had Any Pride Comments

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I’d let you go if I had any pride.
The emotions felt I cannot hide.
My soul you do tear apart.
Yet I still offer you my heart.
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Errol Anderson
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Tai Chi Italy 07 May 2011

I liked the repetition Errol, but the final lines had me questioning! The love does not hide, but the pain does! Or we would be eaten alive. It is a sad and bad world and we do what we have to do in order to survive! Human nature smiling at you Tai

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Errol Anderson

Errol Anderson

Jamaica, but now live in Canada.
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