Friday, August 4, 2006

If I Had A Crystal Ball Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I had a crystal ball,
I could wind a scarf
Through my locks
And dress flamboyantly
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Barry Van Allen 20 December 2007

Dee, Re-reading what you have written, makes me reconsider, again and again... B.V.A.

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alice sunderland 12 March 2007

lovely poem DD. especially like the ending. just the sorta poem i like to read! ! al xx

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Risha : Ahmed 05 January 2007

my kind of poetry. Love it.

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Francesca Johnson 12 August 2006

Mmm.....in my opinion, it's best not to know what the future holds. This enables us to live day to day, hour by hour, and to be surprised by the good things we encounter. I wouldn't want to know in advance about the bad stuff either..... A great poem, Dee. Love, Fran xx

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Chuck Audette 09 August 2006

Hmm.. I thought I had commented on this already. Needless to say, I really, really like this one. The last verse, where you turn it around, is wonderful. - chuck

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R H 05 August 2006

I love the way you have composed this, as always you draw the reader in and hold them to the very last line. As for good or bad, I think dreams and intuition can sometimes guide you, merge the subconscious with the conscious and follow your destiny! Justine :)

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Scarlett Treat 04 August 2006

Ah, but if we had these lovely powers and crystal balls, then we would have to become superhuman, and save the world! All the joys and sorrows of mankind would rest on our shoulders, and we would be responsible for not stopping things when they went wrong....I would rather stumble along from day to day, making my mistakes and learning (I hope!) from them. Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2006

Ah Dee! the belle of the ball in crystal, well, we all have gifts/talents and sometimes we expect our-selves to be super human, with unsupassable insight, But the truth is that we are very much the same in many ways as many others We cry, we laugh, and we live the best we can You my dear have a caring heart for others and are a wonderful person to know this shines and others feel your light Love duncan XXX

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