If I Had Comments

If I had wings to fly like an eagle I would've flown so high and would've made my nest on the mountain top There I would've reasoned with God and would've submitted my petition to the Holy One - - -A lovely imaginative write that show your good heart, thanks for sharing.

There I would've beaten my head on the altar and would 've given my life in exchange to my sick eaglet What a confession! One remembers the prayer of Moses and Paul! Thanks for sharing!

I would've shed my tears on His holy altar and would've taken my sick eaglet and placed him on His lap......i would have given my life for my eaglet to see it dancing all along.........fine, sense of self sacrifice and goodness of the heart..... lovely poem dear poetess Susheela. tony

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Susheela.