Friday, November 4, 2011

If I Get Wings..... Comments

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If I get wings I'll fly to my
dreamland,
Where time doesn't flow away
like sand…..
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Anita Trivedi
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Jazib Kamalvi 17 March 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Anita T. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Ramesh Rai 04 October 2013

most beautiful. loved your ink

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 April 2012

'...And then I’ll be around to wipe their tears....' For me its the bottom line of this poetry not in dream land but in real land...thanks for comment...10+ Please read 'I want to be raped'.....niv lol

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Unwritten Soul 09 November 2011

Wonderful :) , Anita, there's a power in your hands and it gives you a pair of wings without you noticed..it is a freedom in writing..you create the real atmosphere feeling to calm anybody who read it..and without real wings you made your dream come true...it very nice poem Anita, Keep writing and sorry for late respond..Keep nice words alive my friend_Unwritten Soul

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Keith Anastase KAMOSO 07 November 2011

Awwwww.....I'm glad you are back. this is a touching poem Anita...my best part is: I’ll land to the world of ocean, And then make everyone feel ocean is not as deep as our emotions. I’ll land to the world of candle’s life, And then there will be no darkness even in small size. loved it.....

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 04 November 2011

good.. keep writing more.. meditate more while writing you will enhance.. god bless..! !

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