If I forget you, Love,
No dove
Will sing in the forests;
All the sparrows, leaving their nests,
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beautiful poem.emotion is dripping from every lines.liked it.
i thinx i can say it goes Bah bah Bah bah BAH. I love d powerful rhymes. good 1
Wow. You hve written it so well, that I can picture it vividly. And on top of that it isn't sentimental, I can imagine that you are just stating the obvious :) Great poem
Sayeed, very deep way of loving, that everything seems meaningless because it is only this love which matters and gives meaning. Very romantic and passionate indeed.
This as a very beautiful poem, Sayeed, yet not too soppy or sentimental. Loved it. I rated it a 10! Dawn xxx
You are right, life without love is useless...i love you poem.
strong and beautiful! ! ! Love is something is not? ? ? ? Very well describe! ! ! !
so poignant ad beautifully written a heart full love got put on the white paper and then there was birth of an amazing melody............ thank you for sharing sir love payal
Amazing poem! I can really feel the emotion behind it because it's so strong here. And, nice structure, too.
I liked everything in the poem except that I feel that you could have used another word in place of cows which to me isn't very romantic. However, it is just my opinion and it may not be the best. Anyway, I like the flow and style of this poem. Lovely!
Beautiful heartfelt poem with great rhythm and flow, great write!
Strong highly emotional poem! It is like you are scared you will forget someone who is no longer here! Lost but never forgotten! Interesting structure that kept me hooked til the end!
such depth of feeling; giving meaning to living, is truly to love sincerely