Sunday, November 4, 2012

If I Forget You Comments

Rating: 3.7

If I forget you, Love,
No dove
Will sing in the forests;
All the sparrows, leaving their nests,
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Sayeed Abubakar
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Gillena Cox 12 April 2013

such depth of feeling; giving meaning to living, is truly to love sincerely

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2012

beautiful poem.emotion is dripping from every lines.liked it.

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Abaka Blessing Anastasia 22 November 2012

i thinx i can say it goes Bah bah Bah bah BAH. I love d powerful rhymes. good 1

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Far Lapenna 16 November 2012

Wow. You hve written it so well, that I can picture it vividly. And on top of that it isn't sentimental, I can imagine that you are just stating the obvious :) Great poem

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 06 November 2012

Sayeed, very deep way of loving, that everything seems meaningless because it is only this love which matters and gives meaning. Very romantic and passionate indeed.

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Dawn Ferrett 05 November 2012

This as a very beautiful poem, Sayeed, yet not too soppy or sentimental. Loved it. I rated it a 10! Dawn xxx

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Hamid Negah 05 November 2012

You are right, life without love is useless...i love you poem.

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Anita Sehgal 05 November 2012

lovely read...poignant!

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Anita Sehgal 05 November 2012

lovely and melodious ring to the poem!

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K Khaing Sl 05 November 2012

nice, I think it ll better if u use more words,

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Poetheart Morgan 05 November 2012

strong and beautiful! ! ! Love is something is not? ? ? ? Very well describe! ! ! !

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Payal Parande 05 November 2012

so poignant ad beautifully written a heart full love got put on the white paper and then there was birth of an amazing melody............ thank you for sharing sir love payal

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Zahra Shariat 05 November 2012

It's pure and beautiful, that's what I can say

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Ximena Nunez 04 November 2012

Amazing poem! I can really feel the emotion behind it because it's so strong here. And, nice structure, too.

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Aminath Neena Haneef 04 November 2012

I liked everything in the poem except that I feel that you could have used another word in place of cows which to me isn't very romantic. However, it is just my opinion and it may not be the best. Anyway, I like the flow and style of this poem. Lovely!

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Hazel Durham 04 November 2012

Beautiful heartfelt poem with great rhythm and flow, great write!

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Stevie Taite 04 November 2012

Strong highly emotional poem! It is like you are scared you will forget someone who is no longer here! Lost but never forgotten! Interesting structure that kept me hooked til the end!

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Sayeed Abubakar

Sayeed Abubakar

Jessore / Bangladesh
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