Monday, June 27, 2016

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If I find fault; it's not my fault,
That I'm not blind.
If I find fault; it's not my fault,
That I'm keen of mind.
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Elena Plotkin
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Daniel Brick 24 November 2016

Your poem shows the power of repetition. The repeated odd numbered lines are like drum beats in music hammering home the main theme, and long before the w-o-r-d-s have convinced of your position, the repetition has. I felt I was reading at the speed of thought, picking up speed as I became convinced your defense of your integrity was justified, in fact it was my defense as well.

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Pamela Sinicrope 27 June 2016

I can not find fault with your logic or repetitive use of a phrase to get across your point Elena. Well said! :)

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