Friday, January 16, 2009

If I Ever. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I ever
need love i find it in you.
If I never
find love will i ever find you?
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Zachary Jessell
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Brianna Trombley 17 January 2009

i liked it a lot, the contrast yet connection, very good write especially for your first poem, cant wait to read more

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Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

Poem has a way of dancing with words. KEEP TRUCKIN

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Zachary Jessell 16 January 2009

This is my First Poem, I'm 17. i never really tried it before but i always liked reading them i hope you guys like it at least a little bit haha

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