If I Ever Live Again Comments

Beautiful write - I echo the words of Sunprincesss here.

I just read tis, and I must admit that I am utterly speechless. I was very moved by this piece of literature, and I found it to be full of love and loss, as well as a desire to do more to help another. It is very selfless, as you don't grieve over loss of life, but instead for the parents who lost you. This is very emotionally touching. I thank you for inviting me to read this. G

This very fantastic. It is interesting and one decides to read it after one reads the title. Wonderful imagery and you took nicely to the ends. I liked it. Lord, make me the rain to wash away mother's tears. Make me the strength on father's shoulders to carry mother high and bear me again Very touching.

This poem reveals the belief and culture of the people. Great imageries were employ to drive home the theme. Great write

Amazing poignant write with great imagery and a great sense of loss, but also remembering your parents left behind, asking our Lord to comfort and ease their pain. Inspired write! !

Awesome pen flowing! make me an unending comfort and healing to their souls. I love these verses.Well done! This is 10.

Powerful and Touching! A real reservoir of meaningful and rich imagery that I can Identify with 100%! Your honest words give you away! Beauty and talent magically blended in this amazing write! A little of everything is embedded in this thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

A beautiful poem indeed. A tragedy that we don't want. A heartfelt appeal to our Lord.

You brought me tears to my eyes. So much beauty, sadness, love and solidarity! 'm Really speechless! ! Thank you for sharing with me, an honor!