If I ever beg divine Providence to live another life
I’d breathe dreams bliss in rife
Hand in hand on paths unknown
On cliffs, in meadows like feathers blown
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Very beautifully worded poem and pious thoughts on peace and serenity in life.
In all simplicity your asking is a reflection of your warmth of heart and it has to be appreciated. In fact human life on the earth is somewhat okay dear Jasmine. If I ever meet the Divine Providence and I asked for choose a life for another person, I am proposing to ask Him/Her to go for a life for Himself/Herself. Ha ha, ha.... We spare those high above us and punish ourselves for none of our errors of serious commission. A good write madam. Thank you for your comments on my poem.
a strong and powerful write. words composition and its sequence are penned nicely with a beautiful imagery thoughts. thnx for sharing
A fascinatin otherworldly poem i enjoyd geting lost in d imagery. Bohot zabardast likhti he ap.
Ambling through wild and strange paths and worlds in the company of a bosom friend would be heavenly! Reading this poem itself gifts one with such an ecstatic experience!