Sunday, October 7, 2012

If I Disapeared Comments

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If I disapeared
how would you feel

Never speak a word again
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Danyel Theresa Vertalics
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Ray Quesada 09 October 2012

i like how in the stanza where you used left and felt to rhyme. Those words are anagrams of each other, and even though they don't rhyme, i still thinkn its very clever usage of language. originality is king in poetry. please feel free to comment or just read some of my poems! ! -rq-

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Danyel Theresa Vertalics

Danyel Theresa Vertalics

Perth Amboy New Jersey
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