Friday, July 5, 2019

If I Died (Would You Be There) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I died
Would you be there darling
To carry the burden of abandonment in your shoulders
I mean my corpse
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Rumi Ullidov
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A B Faniki 10 August 2019

Nice and steady flow of words with rhythm and rhyme. I can relate with the imagery u creat. Cheers

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