Thursday, January 21, 2010

If I Died Today Comments

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If I died today i would cry
i would cry for all the time i spent being sad
when i could have been smiling
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Elizabeth Jacqueline Mpanga
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Aastha Uppal 21 January 2010

wow what a great concept! ! ! disappointment towards the end for not valuing the things which we were blessed upon previously.. so very true..... disappointment at its best! ! ! great work! ! !

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Beth King 21 January 2010

Wow, I’ve read a lot of poems on here, a lot I didn't like, BUT, yours is the first one out of MANY, that I have enjoyed tremendously! Nice workyou

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