Saturday, July 18, 2020

If I Die Tonight Comments

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If I die tonight will you cry?
Would you mourn my death,
Celebrate my life or vise versa?
How would I be remembered
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Craig Mize
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Rajnish Manga 18 July 2020

Would my finale destination be heaven Or would I wake up in a fiery pit in? .... //.... Like a person who has to migrate to another place for good, the protagonist has all kinds of thoughts splashing his mind. So many possibilities and fears lurking before him. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking work.

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Mahtab Bangalee 18 July 2020

If I died tonight, would my soul live on To be birthed into another body So I could breathe God's breath again..........wonderful feelings and expression; insightful writings

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