Monday, May 7, 2018

If I Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaving you behind
If I fly ahead in the sky
Far among the clouds
Where you can't reach
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Rini Shibu
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Akhtar Jawad 12 May 2018

Love overflowing from the heart like wine overflowing from a glass, a beautiful poem.

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Kostas Lagos 08 May 2018

You can make even cold death to sound sweet! Superb poem!

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Valsa George 08 May 2018

I will visit you in your dreams and one day I will help you to cross the finish line Reassurance of a life of bliss after death! A heartfelt write....! A loving soul will live in the hearts of others, though separated by death! Beautiful poem!

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Lamar Cole 08 May 2018

This is a very beautiful heartfelt poem. It is one of the best that I have ever read.

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A beautiful and thoughtful poem about death. Elegantly crafted.

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Robert Murray Smith 07 May 2018

Rini, your poem is exquisite +++10 Robert

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