Friday, November 4, 2016

If I Die..... Comments

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If I die on my sofa in this evening,
The birds in my garden will not cease singing,
The butterflies in the flowers will not stop their merry fluttering,
The squirrels in the tree in my courtyard
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Bisy Untan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 December 2022

Such a wonderful poem! My pleasure revisiting it

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 May 2019

wow how wonderfully said- My death will be celebrated by myself As a jasmine dropping silently to earth......./// it's a mystical note of own sense; it's great /// If I die no change will come there someone sob, someone cry, someone weep and then after a while as usual life................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2017

Nothing will be changed if someone dies...The people in the town, in my village, and even in my house will be busy as ever, No weeping, no mourning It will be the purest lie as in every death.! My death will be celebrated by myself As a jasmine dropping silently to earth-A Scintillating piece of writing..I felt it within..Congratulations..! !

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Bisy Untan 16 November 2017

I humbly appreciate your remarks. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2016

Life will surely go on! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2016

This is real. We think that the world will mourn forever for our death. But it does not happen. Time flows with its usual pace and life goes on earth goes on as usual. Very nice really. Loved it.

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Bisy Untan 12 November 2016

Thank you for commenting on my thoughts!

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Valsa George 09 November 2016

Though we say such things, inside our heart of hearts, we wish that every body should mourn our death and most of us prefer to shun the reality that life will go on as before, even after our death! I like the last line much...!

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Bisy Untan 09 November 2016

Thank you madam.Your words make me examine my inner heart again whether I have such a wish.I don't know.Let me watch my soul for a few days. Your comments are really inspiring.

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