If I Die Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

If I Die

Rating: 5.0


I stand all alone
In the pouring rain
Like a rose bud lone
On a little shoot sans leaves.

Darkness falls like a log
The doors croak like frogs
And a thousand years pass
Without as much as a whisper.

Drugged by passage of time
I snuggle against earth's bosom
O! Father, My Father!
What does it matter if I die?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 March 2022

I really enjoy this. It made me a little bit weeping

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 March 2022

I can understand. I can. My heart was so heavy when the poem were taking shape….. And then! When it poured out, I was relieved and my heart was light again… I don't know the answers to why, how, what etc…

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Gloom takes over… nothing matters

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Alyx True Edge 22 July 2024

depression creeping in through the crack created by the illusion of the irrelevance of life. Grief, sadness, somber words, thanks 5/5

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 April 2022

A magnificent poem about death. Very touching and so beautifully crafted. It made me shed a tear. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 April 2022

What a beautiful poem! The opening lines alone can move a reader...grip him towards the end of the poem. The closure lines are so powerful.

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It makes my heart heavy to read your words Rose Marie. Thank you, dear poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

I had posted rejoinders to the posts of Dilipji and Evelyn. But my posts have simply disappeared. Truant PoemHunter!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 March 2022

Somewhat melancholy and beautifully written, a fascinating contemplation of death and a staggering amount of passing time.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

It is a pleasure to read you, Evelyn. Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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