If I Cry........ Comments

Beautiful poem. If I appreciate don't stop me let my adoration flow out from my heart and praise Sameer Ahmed For like the fullness and fragrance of this.................

This is probably my favorite poem that I've read. It is beautiful.

if i cry donot stop me... what an thought dear... u deserve 10. i u get the time pse read mine 'Cry not' and find similarity tks

Nice poem....hope everyone become stronger after they cried

Nice and lucid, lovely poem. 10++

How brave to allow yourself to cry in front of others. I'm afraid it's something I can't do. That being said, should you go through it all alone? - Even if you feel it does make you stronger in the end? Lovely written.

if i would have been ur 4end i would never have let u cry n if i see any of my friend crying i don't fink so any one of them can stop me from stopping them from crying! crying doesn't fix up things but courage does! A very heart touching and well written poem! keep it up but keep smiling! ; -)

i agree this is an amazing poem

This poem is so well written. as most of yours are.

beautifully written well done

I really like your poem its really good. Every one should be able to cry and be pround of it, not to be ashamed of it! Love the poem

Sometimes we heal through our tears. Movingly written.

After we cry we can be more relieved.. I feel it too.. touching poem..

A heart-felt poem. Love it. Gave it a ten.

wonderful poem. very deep and heart-felt.

nice sequence. Best wishes, Sabrina

Gorgeous poem, it has got so meaningful ideas that all human must be true not to hide their emotions and what i really like it that many men ashamed to cry or to tear up this poem tells to release ur self of sad and bad senses by crying, for me i love it a lot deep meaning in it

i enjoyed reading this poem the repetition and imagery is great

Wow! I absolutly love the imagery in this poem! It gives the reader a strength and independence to overcome the sadness and let it out. A very strong message that says stand on your own feet and be strong. I love it!

I enjoyed the read and the imagery that came forth of one who through their tears is able to make better sense of all that is around them. They are not looking for pity or condolences, they are just expressing their emotions about how and what they feel and all that is around them. This is well worded and expressed and has a good flow and rhythmn in it. Hope you don't mind though, did find a couple of things that may help enhance this even more: In the first verse you have, 'Let the rain of tears fall on ground', suggest 'on the ground', and same verse, 'For I like its silty fragrance'. Is it silty or could it be salty? The second verse you have, 'And become insomniac' what about 'And become an insomniac'? Verse four you have 'Removing the clouds of self-pity' suggest 'Remove the.... Last verse you have, 'Let a new thought born' suggest Let a new thought be born.Overall I enjoyed the imagery that came forth and the message within. Well done. Many blessings to you