black rose

black rose

a cruel ruthless world full of vulgar and hate
Sunday, January 20, 2008

If I Cried Comments

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If i cried you wouldn't be there
like you always are for her
no matter how many times i tell you
you'll never know how much it hurts
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Dislocated Heart 20 January 2008

wow... great poem. i guess i can relate. take care. -Justin.

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The pain of someone moving on and leaving you behind can be so strong, you illustrate it well with your poem.

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black rose

black rose

a cruel ruthless world full of vulgar and hate
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