If I Could Write Apoem That, , Comments

Aliyah, I love your poem. It shows your great feeling of Love for the World. Keep up the writing! The world and humanity need voices of Peace and Love in the World like yours. Great job and please keep writing! ! ! Peace and Love

Nice poem. But I beg to differ. If there is no hate in the world, people won't appreciate love. If there is no sadness, there waon't be pleasure too. Everthing bad is the justification for something good. Only two sides of a coin.

What about greed? What about money? Eliminate these first....then go from there. Nice poem....