If I could turn back the clock
and revisit that day.
Things would be different.
I would know the right words to say.
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Nice and good hope to be back to the happiest past; lovely poem penned; great to read
line 8: I think 'made', not 'make'. 4th stanza: I think you purposely used 3 lines, not 4. I approve of that! ! ! Very nice. bri ;)
I looked up the meanings of 'metaphor'. I guess 'turn back the clock' could quality as one. I'm not well-versed in what is and is not a metaphor or other type of symbolism. ;)
There is a couple things I wouldn't mind turning the clock back on. Great poem!
Thank you everyone for your kind comments.