Sunday, June 25, 2006

If I Could See You Comments

Rating: 4.6

If I could see you,
to have one look into your face.
If I could see you,
and hear you speak my name.
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Christopher Cofield
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Ruby Root 01 August 2006

Nice caring poem Christopher with good imagery and emotion. This is an excellent write. Take care.

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Joe Breunig 26 June 2006

An enjoyable write; perhaps you would care to read my poem 'On God's Mountain'.

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Guarded Heart 25 June 2006

You Make me want to cry, only because it hit's so close. I see you are new here, and i wish you well, if the rest are half as good as this i know you'll do fine. Heart

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