Friday, May 12, 2017

If I Could Pray Comments

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If I could pray, then I would pray for strength,
the strength of courage in the face of fear,
for in a dream I saw a dreadful sight,
as it was I laid there upon the bier.
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Barry Middleton
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Rajnish Manga 12 May 2017

The narrative is perplexing Nightmares may not be real life incidents but they leave a big impact on a person's psyche. This poem brings to fore a very nerve racking experience which the poet has had. The experience deftly presented in the poem. Thanks.

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Barry Middleton 12 May 2017

More of a waking nightmare. Thanks for the comment.

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