Sunday, November 30, 2008

If I Could Live Forever Comments

Rating: 5.0

If i could live forever
I definitely would...
walk through the dark frozen canyon
of the great Valles Marineris of mars
...
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
COMMENTS
Arik Carpenter 15 January 2009

i loved the way the words flowed

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Njiri Wambui 12 January 2009

i like the flow of your words.They are well fused.we could live for today and also do some if not all those things.It inspired me

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 15 December 2008

Awesome poem Allen. You put so much thought into the wonders not just of the world, but of the universe.10.

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