Friday, February 13, 2009

If I Could...I Would... Comments

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If I could die early
I would kneel to Death
And I would ask fairly
If I could be your breath.
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Tork Souad Diana
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Carmen Johnson 24 March 2009

Very good, but do you realize that in the second stanza last line you wrote angle..instead of angel. Unless that is what you meant.

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Tork Souad Diana

Tork Souad Diana

Romania
Tork Souad Diana
Tork Souad Diana
Romania
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