Sunday, December 1, 2013

If I Could Fly Like A Bird Comments

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If I could fly like a bird
I would soar like an angel
Through the valley of death
Through the tunnel of the great white light
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Allan James Saywell
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Rajnish Manga 23 February 2020

If you permit, I would like to translate this fantastic poem in Hindi. Good things should be like 'dreams with feathers' so that they could have an inter-continental flight.

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Rajnish Manga 23 February 2020

Fantastic poem weaving exotic images from this planet to those of the celestial type. The best thing is that it shows the man with a real big heart which keeps him at home anywhere in the universe. Loved reading this poem. Thanks. I quote a few lines: If I could fly like a bird The seven seas would become my own Anywhere would become my home.... Make infinity my home

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2018

I would soar like an angel Through the valley of death Through the tunnel of the great white light.....make Infinity my home, dreams with feathers...... very fine poetic notes and language and emotions. thank u dear poet. tony

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 26 April 2015

a very interesting piece full of wish...man has several dreams and aspirations....but we dnt always achieve all..good poem

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Gajanan Mishra 01 December 2013

very good write, thanks, I like it.

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